Words Written: 1,104
Cumulative Length: 27,802 words
Scene Finished? Yes
I think this relationship is maturing. I have another winger to throw very soon after this scene, plus a lot of good ideas for some personal conflict. What I need is the next step for pursuing the bad guys. I kind of have an idea. In the next few days this story will be introduced to Ollie. If Ollie is put in the right perspective, a reader will find it a lot easier to sympathize with Colin, despite his only major scenes being shooting, beating, and dying.